Question

can someone look at my writing?

Answer 1

A perfectionist is someone who has to have everything right. I'm not a perfectionist, but I like things a certain way. In the story, "The Possibility of Evil," a woman named Miss Strangeworth was that perfectionist.

There are many traits that fit Miss Strangeworth, but one main trait was miss perfect. First, one example would be how she wanted everything right and her way especially when she wrote her secret gossip letters. Another example would be she had to be on time for everything and no to delay turning something in. Last example would be she wanted her town to be the very best just like her home was. I would like to be on time for things just not too early and I also would like my city and home to look good, but not going over the top. In conclusion, Miss Strangeworth is a woman who's quick and fast on her feet to do everything.

As you can see, a trait that describes Miss Strangeworth is miss perfect. If you just like her, you get everything done faster and don't have time to procrastinate, you can relax. Even though you might not wait till the last minute or day late, but you decide to work on something three or two more days ahead before it's due, you're not like Miss Strangeworth exactly. You have your own way of things.

Answer 2

umm,no offence,but isnt dis math?

Answer 3

"If you just like here," should be "If you ARE just like here,". That's the first grammatical error I noticed.

Answer 4

umm you wrote kno wrong instead you put no

Answer 5

avoid using contractions too, like I'm should be I am. at least that is what teachers have told me before

Answer 6

on the end of line 3,it should be not instead of no

Answer 7

"Last example would be" should be "The last example would be". Just put a "The" in there.

Answer 8

"(THE) last example would be she wanted her town to be the very best(insert comma here) just like her home was.

Answer 9

I would like to be on time for things just not too early and I also would like my city and home to look good, but not going over the top. SHOULD BE: I would like to be on time for things, but not too early. Also, I would like my city and home to look good, but I am not going over the top.

Answer 10

miss perfect should be Miss Perfect because it is being used as a pronoun

Answer 11

A perfectionist is someone who has to have everything right. I'm not a perfectionist, but I like things a certain way. In the story, "The Possibility of Evil," a woman named Miss Strangeworth was that perfectionist.
People said the paragraph sounded awkward; maybe it should be more like:

Someone who always has to have everything right would be called a perfectionist. I, myself, am not, but I still like things to be a certain way. On the other hand, in the story "The Possibility of Evil", a woman named Miss Strangeworth was a perfectionist.

Just an idea, my versions definitely not perfect either...

Answer 12

"Another example would be she had to be on time for everything and no to delay turning something in." should be: "Another example was her need to always be on time for everything and she would never think of turning something in late."

Answer 13

i hope i helped out, time for me to peace out though, good luck!

Answer 14

thks so much sk8
anytime u need help on ur hw i got ur back.

Answer 15

woops, before I go, my one comment ("If you just like here," should be "If you ARE just like here,". That's the first grammatical error I noticed.) i made my own mistake. It's "HER" no "HERE", haha

Answer 16

i knew wat u meant

Answer 17

nooooooooooo problem at all, i was kinda bored anyways, lol. good luck with the report, and I'll talk to you some other day :D

Answer 18

thks soo much!
Ur pretty gud!

Answer 19

yeah, i've never actually enjoyed writing, but teachers have complimented me a lot in the past. anyways, like I said, peace out :D!

Answer 20

decues