Question

does this sentence make sense?
There was no chance of this being a convivial visit, and there was no chance of my alacrity.

Answer 1

yes it does

Answer 2

Yup , it does make sense

Answer 3

no!

Answer 4

No . From Grammatical point of view it does not make any sense.

Answer 5

It is an awkward construction. The first clause seems fine, there was not chance of this being a convivial visit. Some implication that something more acrimonious was about to happen. But what does your alacrity have to do with convivialism? I think you meant, there was no chance this was going to be a convivial visit so you were in no hurry to make it happen? That is why you used the word alacrity? Play around with it a little.