Question

This is a poem about God as my inspiration help me to improve it

Answer 1

Please help me in doing this I need some suggestions and please fix my poem if i made mistakes.
it should be 5 stanzas with 4 lines

I already start ted this stanzas:

Oh God the mighty God
You gave me the best kind of love
You gave me joy when i'm in pain
You gave me strength when i am weak

You made the light that makes me see
You made the humans that makes me want to live
You made the breath-taking landscapes that makes me dream
Oh God the creator you are so extraordinary

When I'm alone
You are always there
When I made mistakes
You always forgive me

Answer 2

You are my friend
You are my idol
You are my inspiration
You are my protector

Answer 3

i think so.

Answer 4

is my poem good?

Answer 5

yes it's good.

Answer 6

did I made mistakes?

Answer 7

but you can edit it like this:-oh god than no need of oh mighty god.

Answer 8

please help me in putting punctuation marks

Answer 9

and it not when i am in pain ,it when i was in pain.

Answer 10

what do you suggest for my last stanza?

Answer 11

can you bring some ryhming words with it.

Answer 12

it will be ended beautifully.

Answer 13

anywayz i like your poem.

Answer 14

ok Thanks! :)

Answer 15

hey i realy think if you polish your skill little bit more you can be a fine poet.

Answer 16

what about this?
for the ending

You are special to me
Cause you make me see
All the beautiful things around me
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Answer 17

oh thanks !but this was ,i think you are a beginner.if so you have a long way to go before you sleep.

Answer 18

wow! thanks for the compliment, actually this is the first time that I made a poem this long.

Answer 19

that's why it is not that good

Answer 20

see i told you,but this was a very nice poem than.

Answer 21

and i am also making mistakes at my grammar,nevertheless, I hope i can make my grammar better before i graduate from high school
and I will try to make poems if I have nothing to do, because of your compliment
Thanks :)

Answer 22

I hope that I can be an engineer and a good English speaker

Answer 23

^_^

Answer 24

see no one is 100% perfect ,not even me.but only one thing gives you 90% output and that will be practice and 10% god will give you.ok!friend.

Answer 25

ok! :)

Answer 26

Awww Moongazer i love it !!! ^ ^ and God Bless U!

Answer 27

Its so peeeeerty!