What is wrong with this sentence " Facebook is a website, where fellow classmates, coworkers, friends and family member communicate with each other in a proper way. "
I think there's too many commas, am I right?

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What is wrong with this sentence " Facebook is a website, where fellow classmates, coworkers, friends and family member communicate with each other in a proper way. " 
I think there's too many commas, am I right?

anonymous · Answer

Not exactly.  I just moved a comma from one place to another.
"Facebook is a website where fellow classmates, coworkers, friends, and family members communicate with each other in a proper way."

anonymous · Answer

this is what the sentence should be, in my opinion...
"Facebook is a website where fellow classmates, coworkers, friends, and family members communicate with each other in a proper way." 

your welcome... ;D

anonymous · Answer

You have to change family member to family members.
And the comma doesn't need to go after website.

anonymous · Answer

And to be nit picky: There ARE too many commas, not there's (there is) too many commas.

anonymous · Answer

" Facebook is a website where fellow classmates, coworkers, friends, and family members communicate with each other in a proper way. " 

:)

anonymous · Answer

You should remove the comma after website, and you should have family members not family member.

anonymous · Answer

No no - The grammatically correct sentence is:

"Facebook is a website that tries to prevent you from doing any and all homework."

anonymous · Answer

i notised that there was not an s after family members as well.