How can I reword this thesis statement so that it flows better?
"Today, it is easy to focus on the deficiencies of the leaders and ideas of the Revolutionaries. However, to disparage their ideology is to miss the great significance of the American Revolution."

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How can I reword this thesis statement so that it flows better? 
"Today, it is easy to focus on the deficiencies of the leaders and ideas of the Revolutionaries. However, to disparage their ideology is to miss the great significance of the American Revolution."

msmr · Answer

I like your thesis...the only changes I would make is to condense it into one sentence:
While it is easy to focus in the deficiencies of the leaders and ideas of the Revolutionaries, to disparage their ideology is to miss the great significance of the American Revolution.

anonymous · Answer

Such a simple solution :) Thank you very much, that sounds nice. I'll be able to write a good intro and then end it with that thesis.