My dad went out to get some supplies for my project. I was too lazy to do it before and I did it last minute. I am the only child, which is really annoying because I have no one to play with; it sucks because most of the time I am so lonely. My dad says that they closed the store because it is snowing hard so he has to go to a store in Germantown which is far from where we live so he has to stay in a motel or hotel because on his way they were closing roads and there was a lot of ice on then.
My mom was worried how we would go around the house and made me carry a flashlight everywhere I went.

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My dad went out to get some supplies for my project. I was too lazy to do it before and I did it last minute. I am the only child, which is really annoying because I have no one to play with; it sucks because most of the time I am so lonely. My dad says that they closed the store because it is snowing hard so he has to go to a store in Germantown which is far from where we live so he has to stay in a motel or hotel because on his way they were closing roads and there was a lot of ice on then.
	My mom was worried how we would go around the house and made me carry a flashlight everywhere I went.

anonymous · Answer

was that a good story?

anonymous · Answer

Hermella, try posting your story as an answer, ok? That should help.

anonymous · Answer

ok

anonymous · Answer

This part has nothing to do with anything else, and it should be omitted:
"I am the only child, which is really annoying because I have no one to play with; it sucks because most of the time I am so lonely."

anonymous · Answer

Also, you should use something like Microsoft Word.  It will catch your many mistakes.