Hi everyone! I finished an essay for a transfer application. It has less than 300 words. Can someone check it? Thanks!

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anonymous · Answer

What I need is to check the Grammar of the essay because I am not a native speaker. Although any idea is welcome too.

anonymous · Answer

"...they gave me the possibility to chose an academic subject of my preference."
The word "chose" should be changed to "choose".

"...I prefer Mathematics to Computer Engineer."
This should instead read "I prefer Mathematics to Computer Engineering."

"Hence, why does New College of Florida (NCF) appeal to me as a college option?"
You should eliminate the word "hence" from this sentence.

"The answer to this rhetorical question seems simple: NCF offers me an
open curriculum in which I can be my own course creator."
You should replace the colon in that sentence with a semicolon.

That's about it that I can see. This is very well-written for a non-native speaker. :)

anonymous · Answer

Thanks for your help and the compliment!!