Rewrite the following paragraph to make more interesting sentences. Use any techniques you want, but be sure to vary sentence length and structure and add transitions. You can add or delete minor facts as you feeel appropriate, but you need to include all the major ideas.
My grandfather saw an amazing amount of technological change in one lifetime. He was born in 1874. That was before George Custer died at Little Big Horn. He traveled around with a horse and buggy when he was a child. He used a kerosene lantern to light the house at night. The light bulb was invented a few years after he w

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Rewrite the following paragraph to make more interesting sentences. Use any techniques you want, but be sure to vary sentence length and structure and add transitions. You can add or delete minor facts as you feeel appropriate, but you need to include all the major ideas.
My grandfather saw an amazing amount of technological change in one lifetime. He was born in 1874. That was before George Custer died at Little Big Horn. He traveled around with a horse and buggy when he was a child. He used a kerosene lantern to light the house at night. The light bulb was invented a few years after he w

jagatuba · Answer

What is your question? Surely you aren't asking someone to do your homework for you, so what are you having a hardtime with? You need to be as specific as possible about what you are struggling with if you want help.

anonymous · Answer

So, now if you check out your previous two questions and work with that material, you should be able to apply those same principles here.

You have to understand the material and to work with it to be able to apply it to new situations and to build upon it. That's the only way you'll be able to incorporate it into your own writing, and that's why you need to be able to understand it, rather than just having the answers handed to you. That won't get you anywhere in the long run but into a deep hole. You don't even want to be trying to back-peddle and understand gobs of information that you have supposedly mastered and moved on from at some remote point in the future.