Question

Could you edit my poem?

Also, is this a good title?

Regrets

Sometimes I wish for the sky to go grey,
for all my fear to just fall away.

I wish for a world all black and white,
where no one feels the need to fight.

I wish for a world a world away,
A world with no sorrow,
a world with no pain.

I wish for a world with my broken heart,
A world where I can not fall apart.

I wish for a world as bland as can be,
A world where no memories are haunting me.

But most of all,
I wish for escape.
I wish for the world to fade away.

Answer 1

Na, there is no sense of 'regret' in the poem. I rather feel sorrow and sadness. You're not clear in the second stanza. Why, in a 'black and white world', will there be no need to fight? The biggest fights(the world wars) have been in black and white(if you want to refer to old times through 'black and white').
Overall though, the sentences rhyme, and the poem is good to read. Nice work.

Answer 2

By black and white, I mean clear cut. An easy yes or no without any hard choices.

There will be no need to fight because the argument will have been removed. In a black and white world, there is only black(wrong) and white(right) no grey.

Answer 3

Sometimes I wish for the sky to turn grey,
for all my fear to just wash away.

I wish for a world all black and white,
where no one feels the need to fight.

I wish for a world a world away,
A world with no sorrow,
a world with no pain.

I wish for a world with my broken heart,
A world where I can't fall apart.

I wish for a world as bland as possible,
A world where no memories are haunting me.

But most of all, I wish for escape.
I wish for the world to all fade away.

I changed some things to give it more detail- and made it sound less rhyming but I didn't know if you wanted to do that. I don't kn ow, in the poetry that I write I don't like to rhyme, but you did a good job of rhyming, but I never rhyme when I write poetry so I added some of my style to it. You don't have to use my version if you don't like it.