Question

need help revise this sentence: during the crispy chilly night it ran wild in the wind.

Answer 1

This could be organized in a number of different ways... The way that has the most logical flow would most likely be:

It ran wild in the wind during the crispy, chilly night.

Answer 2

ok so the original sentence is during the crispy chilly night it ran wild in the wind to hunt for its food a wild savage beast of flesh. but the underlined part is during the crisp chilly night it. so how would i revise that

Answer 3

Maybe:

It ran wild in the wind during the crispy, chilly night; a wild savage beast of flesh hunting for its food.