How to write conclusion for the argumentative paper on animal testing? I am against animal testing, but I have no idea about how to write and make the concluison strong.(feelings & future tendency). Thank you.

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anonymous · Answer

Could you post what you have so far? It's hard to suggest concluding thoughts if I don't know what you're arguing in detail!

anonymous · Answer

Yes, please give us an idea of your arguments and what direction you'd like to go in (strong and assertive, understanding but explanatory, etc).

anonymous · Answer

In conclusion, because the results of animal research are not applicable to humans, and using animals for study in laboratories are cruel and unnecessary, I think humans should not use animals for scientific research. Instead, alternatives capable of replacing animal research should be used. 
(note: My conclusion seems like repeat the before contents(against reasons), so I hope to make the concluison broder and different. Like the meaningful & what will bring to the soceity & feelings) Thank you

anonymous · Answer

I suspect the problem is that your conclusions don't actually reflect your actual feelings.  Do you REALLY oppose animal testing for such clinical and logical reasons?  That's it?  If someone were to prove, beyond the shadow of a doubt, that results of animal research WERE applicable to humans, and that there WERE NOT any exact substitute methods -- would that actually change your mind?

I have a feeling it would not -- that your opposition is rooted somewhere else, in moral or ethical feelings, or sympathy.  If that is the case, then that is what should go into your conclusion.  That is, your conclusion will be strong if and only if it represents accurately your own strong feelings.   (There's nothing wrong with adding the other stuff, the applicabilty of animal modes, et cetera, somewhere else, or leading up to or supporting yoru main point.)

"I hate animal testing because it crushes my soul to think that anywhere in this world a rabbit is being tortured to death to make sure mascara doesn't make my eyes sting.  To hell with that!  I'd rather not wear mascara!  Or, if people want to wear it, let them take the chance it might sting -- it's wrong to force a helpless animal to take the chances that rightfully belong to us."

If something like that is a clearer reflection of your own views, then write it like that, and I bet the forcefulness you want to see will come naturally.