Question

Can someone help me put this in essay form, or at least check it and take out repetitive information. Attached to this is a document.

Answer 1

I had revised your first "why" on the document and here it is:
I had chosen this event because it was an important part of the person I had read about for the reason that if he didn’t step and put himself forward to perform autopsies and scientific research on his fellow inmates at Auschwitz, under the supervision of Josef Mengele, he would have eventually died at a death camp. Along him, his wife and daughter also would have died. I think that Dr. Nyiszli’s volunteerism contributed to writing this heart-wrenching book.

I didn't finish revising the whole document since it would seem as if I had done the work for you. Try to read what I've done and learn from it to correct your paper. Bear in mind that when writing a paper, go straight to the point. That way, your ideas would be better expressed.

Answer 2

I think you should follow what August said. He explained it well.

Answer 3

Thank you very much!