Question

What do you think so far?

Answer 1

I’m the girl who bumped into the boy with two broken legs.

The girl who fell when she was about to sit down because someone simultaneously moved her chair.

And yes, the girl who ran away from her crush when he asked her out.

Before you designate me into your little classified jungle of fish, here me out.

I endured 2 years of homeschool and attended a private school most of my life. There were only 4 people in my class so it’s not like I was an actual social butterfly. Our knowledge of all things “perverted” were limited, I knew nothing really. The education descended in the ground and soon, the school cut back hours and began using my class mates and I as little help monkeys. Finally, when the school plummeted to it’s defeat I had no other option but to enter public school. It was FCAT time and I was way behind, unlike public schools, private schools don’t have FCAT. I was an innocent little puppy entering a cage of pit bulls, and those pit bulls were brutal. My teachers were cats who wanted to get out of the cage and instead of teaching much, let the pit bulls play, and destroy everything and everyone.

I was merely a 13 year old girl with high spirits, always smiling, and boy, did the pit bulls notice that. I wasn’t rich, in fact my family was struggling. The private school I attended was expensive and homeschooling online is often perceived as expensive; it’s not. My parents want the best for me, but this public school is below average. I live in a “ghetto” low class community, and because of that, people expect me to talk ebonics; meaning ghetto language. If I don’t I’m just a white girl wannabe. For going to private school, for having naturally long curly hair, for wanting to learn, for having no curves, and especially for speaking proper. Where I live, people are so stereotypical. I was picked on and an easy target, mainly for the girls.

The boys on the other hand, they loved me. By love me, I mean it was like freaking stalking! They constantly flirted with me, and I constantly ignored them and did the JennaMarbles go away face. They were perverts, I always heard them talking about girls, sports, and s•x. My dad warned me about these guys, that’s probably the reason I took karate and earned my black belt.

I’ve only met one boy at that school, someone I could talk to all day. He wore glasses, was great looking, and adored the way I talked. We raced everyday to class ♥

It all started when he got an 90% and I got 91%…

Answer 2

it is a really good story

Answer 3

Thanks @123lola

Answer 4

your welcome

Answer 5

excellent

Answer 6

dang....that's really good. I could imagine the whole thing and each of the characters. You used great visual language.

Answer 7

This was - awesome! You have an amazing talent, and a great knack for writing!!!
(just needs a very wee li'l bit of grammatical editing)
Right now, I am dying to read more. Please post more soon :)

Answer 8

Amazing.

Answer 9

Beautiful! Wonderfully done and constructed. Amazing talent you have there I would totally buy your book!

Answer 10

Nice work @Haperfink22

Answer 11

Thanks everyone! I'm 13 years old and I really want to become an author! :)

Answer 12

Your straight on your way Fink this is awesome!