Hi, I need help writing the passage below, so that the point of view is first person:

For Detective Holland, it was a routine call. He wasn't particularly suspicious of Thompson. But try as he might, Thompson couldn't control his shaking once he saw Holland's bade; his past experiences with the law hadn't been pleasant.

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Hi, I need help writing the passage below, so that the point of view is first person:


For Detective Holland, it was a routine call. He wasn't particularly suspicious of Thompson. But try as he might, Thompson couldn't control his shaking once he saw Holland's bade; his past experiences with the law hadn't been pleasant.

anonymous · Answer

For me, it was a routine call. I wasn't particularly suspicious of Thompson. But try as he might, Thompson couldn't control his shaking once he saw my bade; his past experiences with the law hadn't been pleasant.

anonymous · Answer

Thanks so much, JoshDavoll! This is excellent - just what I looking for!

anonymous · Answer

Great - no problem! :)