can someone fix my introduction if I have any errors. "One of my saddest moment that change my life was when my dad went back to Mexico. The reason why he went back to Mexico because my grandma was very sick. I knew it was very important for him to go but I wish he was still with my family. When he left I thought my life was going to change. I believe it's important to never forget the person you love and keep going with your life."
I'll put the changes in quotes One of "the" saddest moment that change"d" my life was when my dad went back to Mexico. The reason "" he went back to Mexico "was" because my grandma was very sick. I knew it was very important for him to go but I wish he was still with my family. When he left I thought my life was going to change. I believe it's important to never forget the person you love and keep going "on" with your life.
Lol I'll do what she did ^ "One of "the" saddest moment"s" "of" my life was when my dad went back to Mexico. "He returned to Mexico because my grandma was sick. I knew it was very important for him to go but I wish"ed" he was still with my family. When he left "my life changed". I believe it's important to never forget the person you love and keep going "on" with your life."
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