Question

Their once was a blew bare who had an exceptable job as an ade to a wealthy man. This bare tried deserts and smelled cented candles all day long. After a while he had to say by to his employer because he gained two much wait and was not aloud on the train. His doctor had adviced him to lift steal and right down all the food that he eight throughout the day. He then joined the gym and rode won stationery bike in the mourning. This was the best advise anyone had ever given him.

Answer 1

He was not longer feeling blew about being to large for the train because he new that their were many things for a bare too due two get healthy. A few months later he went too the train for a ride. The train officials no longer said, “Your two big for this train, “butt invited him in for a ride. Bare new that from this day on he would take his health seriously. He even wrote a blog to share with others.

Answer 2

Did you need help in correcting some of the spelling and grammar?

Answer 3

yes..lol

Answer 4

Ok, I will text you a message on this and post it after....

Answer 5

thank u thank u

Answer 6

You are welcome!

Here is the revised:

The Blue Bear
There once was a blue bear who had an acceptable job as an aide to a wealthy man. This bear tried desserts and smelled scented candles all day long. After a while, he had to say bye to his employer because he gained too much weight and was not allowed on the train. His doctor advised him to lift, STEAL, and write down all the foods that he ate throughout the day. He then joined the gym and rode a stationary bike in the morning. This was the best advice anyone had ever given him.

I capped the word, "STEAL" because I am not sure if it makes sense with that sentence...what does steal mean?

Answer 7

• STEAL (noun)
The noun STEAL has 2 senses:
1. an advantageous purchase
2. a stolen base; an instance in which a base runner advances safely during the delivery of a pitch (without the help of a hit or walk or passed ball or wild pitch)
Familiarity information: STEAL used as a noun is rare.

• STEAL (verb)
The verb STEAL has 3 senses:
1. take without the owner's consent
2. move stealthily
3. steal a base
Familiarity information: STEAL used as a verb is uncommon.

Answer 8

He was no longer feeling blue about being too large for the train because he knew that there were many things for a bear to do to get healthy. A few months later, he went to the train for a ride. The train officials no longer said, “You're too big for this train,” but invited him in for a ride. Bear knew that from this day on, he would take his health seriously. He even wrote a blog to share with others.


*This is the revised...I am not sure if anyone else on OpenStudy can add or delete any of this spelling, grammar, or punctuation.

Hope this helps!

Answer 9

thank u again

Answer 10

You are welcome....thank you for your help in economics! Have a great weekend, too!