Analogy: is a way of comparing objects to show how they're relate : I think it's time to make appointment to optometrist. because my vision are burl probably need some glasses so i can see better.Idiom is a phrase that says one thing but actually means another: my boyfriend and I got ready to celebrate my birthday went to dinner he didn't have enough to pay the bill i lost my cool but i end up pay for it.. i lost my cool means i was mad.

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anonymous · Answer

Good examples.  However, this was full of grammar errors and run-on sentences.  Try rereading every sentence aloud to "hear" the errors before submission.

lgbasallote · Answer

and the question is...?

anonymous · Answer

what needs to be connect

lgbasallote · Answer

can you write this in a more organized way? if you mean it's a matching type i cannot see it very clearly to be able to *help*

anonymous · Answer

Analogy: Is a way of comparing objects to show how they're relate : I think it's time to make appointment to optometrist. because my vision are burl probably need some glasses so i can see better.Idiom is a phrase that says one thing but actually means another: my boyfriend and I got ready to celebrate my birthday went to dinner he didn't have enough to pay the bill i lost my cool but i end up pay for it.. i lost my cool means i was mad

anonymous · Answer

what grammar errors and run-on needs to be connect

lgbasallote · Answer

i think i asked if you could present it in a more organized way...you just copy-pasted..lol

anonymous · Answer

ok lol

day_2010 · Answer

Do you need help correcting the mistakes?

anonymous · Answer

Yes please

day_2010 · Answer

Hello!

 Here is a revision for you. 

Analogy:  is a way of comparing objects to show how they are related. For instance, I think it is time to make an appointment to the optometrist, for my vision is blurry and I will probably need some glasses, so I can see well. Idiom: is a phrase that says one thing, but actually means another. For example, my boyfriend and I get ready to celebrate my birthday, and then we go to dinner and he did not have enough money to pay for the bill, so I lost my cool and paid for it. In other words, I was angry.    

- Hope you do well! :)