In my view, “sitting like a frog” which referring to the position while using the squatting toilet is the best position. In this article, I will discuss the advantages of using squat toilets than sitting toilet. Also in this article, I will focus the discussion on the benefits of squat toilets in terms of health for the users, hygiene especially for the women users and its impact on the environment.

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anonymous · Answer

How is this a question.

anonymous · Answer

huhuhu. i need someone to check my essay
i got a lot of grammar issues on this essay

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do you have time to check my essay
maybe you just mark where i make mistakes on the essay

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that my first body paragraph

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this is my full essay.

anonymous · Answer

Did someone assign this topic to you or did you choose it yourself?  LOL I've never read a comparison essay about toilet styles.  I'm not sure what type of paper you're writing, is it strictly informational/compare contrast, or is it supposed to be argumentative (choose a preference and argue for that preference).  If it's the latter, I would take out the part "In my view..." If it's argumentation, you should just say it is or it isn't with supporting facts, because you're trying to prove one method is better than the other.

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huhuhuhu...i choose the topic because no one ever done it before.it argumentative essay.

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first paragraph:   Change "proper's" to proper.  Take out the "Therefore I will discuss".  You don't need to say you're going to say something, you're already saying it.  After the sentence that ends "refers to a person who is squatting on the seat", you could say instead: "Sitting like a frog is the best position to have when using the toilet.  Sitting like a frog while using the toilet has both benefits in terms of health and hygiene to the user most importantly women, as well as a positive impact on the environment".

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Second paragraph:  take out the "although...very simple" and start the second sentence with "Numerous studies have shown that..."  Change the Sentence that starts "Contras with the sitting toilet seat..." On the other hand sitting directly on the seat will cause excessive pressure to build up in the intestine.

anonymous · Answer

I think your essay was pretty good, I would just watch your use of transitional phrases.

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thx a lot .. ;)