Question

I am applying to the University of Michigan- Ann Arbor and they have 2 Essays. Could you guys give me some tips to answer them? fyi I'm in high school and will be applying for my undergrad. I want to major in either Pharmacy or Education.
Essay #1 250 words
Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.

Answer 1

Essay #2 (Required for all applicants. 500 words maximum.)

Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual degree programs) to which you are applying at the University of Michigan. How would that curriculum support your interests?

Answer 2

basically u hve to knw that essay writting consists of three main parts
a) Introduction part which u will clearly state the aim of ur writtings
b) body part which is similarly clear explanations and examples r included this part
c) conclution part which u 'll finalize ur writtings

Answer 3

yes I am aware of the format of an essay. I am asking for tips specifically regarding college admission essays in America. Someone told me they do not like it when you write down statistics about their college. Is that true? for example" According to ABC, U of M Ann Arbor is the 9th best pharmacy school in America" DISCLAIMER-I JUST MADE THIS STATISTIC UP!!!

Answer 4

Number one rule: If there is an upper limit on the word count DO NOT go over it and if there is no upper limit on the word count make the essay as concise as possible. A lot of people screw this up. They think longer is better. That it somehow show they are smart or know more, but it really doesn't and it will only reflect badly on you if you state more than is necessary. Keep in mind those who are judging your essay likely have thousands to read. If you make them slog through a long paper they are going to mark you unfavorably.

Also give them your best writing. Proofread your essay over and over and be sure zero errors get through. Better yet have others read your essay. Objective eyes are quicker to find errors. Even one error could mean someone else getting in instead of you.

In addition, as long as you have people proofreading it for errors, have them critique it for you as well. Ask them if it is interesting and if it held their attention. If if didn't find out where they got bored and fix it or take it out. The more interesting your paper, the more memorable you will be and the higher you will advance in the judging process.

These are the main things I can think of.