Question

please help

Answer 1

persuasive speech supporting your opinion about an issue or subject that matters to you, that you feel passionately about. Include these elements:

A clear description of the issue and a clear precise statement of your opinion- your position, or claim, about the issue or the subject
Reliable and varied evidence that supports your opinion, or claim
Arguments that acknowledge and refute opposing claims
Vivid persuasive language that appeals to your audience
A logical organization that shows the relationship among claims, counterclaims, and evidence
Error-free grammar

Answer 2

Gun control won't stop mass murder or mass shooting if any thing it will make them worse. But lucky us for the second amendment that is in the United States Constitution is the part of the United States Bill of Rights that protects the right of the people to keep and bear arms. It was adopted on December 15, 1791, along with the rest of the Bill of Rights.I want to encourage gun ownership."Everyone should be well armed and well trained in all manners of self defense including gun control." But some people think guns are bad because of James Homes suspect in the mass shooting at an Aurora Colorado movie theater screening of the new Batman film. He had colored his hair red and dressed head-to-toe in protective tactical gear, set off two smoke bomb devices of some kind before spraying the theater with bullets from an AR-15 rifle a 12-gauge shotgun and two .40-caliber handguns and told police he was "the Joker."At least 12 people were killed in the rampage and 58 were injured, one fewer than earlier reported. Of those injured nearly everyone was shot. Ten of the victims were killed inside the theater while two others died at hospitals. So just think if more good people had guns James Homes would not made it as far and killed such people.One morning I listened to a radio report about a Barack Obama campaign appearance in Scranton, Pennsylvania. A voter who seemed friendly enough by the sound of her voice, asked Senator Obama about rumors she had heard that if elected he would take away people’s guns. I have a gun to protect myself. I should be able to do that if I want and have shown I am a responsible citizen by not having been arrested or mental. The governments force police cannot protect me. No one can deny crime is getting worse, those that are caught and convicted do very little jail time. Most criminals are repeat offenders. As the economy and society in general deteriorates, criminals are more desperate and also more bold since punishment is lacking. I have a right not to be a victim. I do not think the government will come kidnap me or make me work in a mine. It is a fact that Australia made everyone turn in their guns and now violent crime is through the roof. It is a fact that one of the first things Hitler did was take away everyone's guns. And don't say that can't happen again, it is, today, in places like Darfur, Rwanda, and many others, where the people have no way to defend themselves.

Answer 3

what do you need help with

Answer 4

grammar and spelling :)

Answer 5

and is it sonds good

Answer 6

second sentence is weird. this sounds better: Lucky for us, the second Amendment in the US Constitution protects the right to bear arms.

Answer 7

so take out but

Answer 8

I'm sorry i can't go through the whole thing right now

Answer 9

it is cool thanks

Answer 10

will you read this aloud, or are you turning this in as a paper?

Answer 11

as a paper online school ;)

Answer 12

I think its fine, same thing as last time(: just combine a few sentences but other than that I like it.

Answer 13

so make my sentences bigger

Answer 14

yeah because your trying to persuade as to why your opinion is right, so mix it up to give more variety.