Question

How's my poem?

Answer 1

Sitting here alone.
Sorrow fills the air.
Hard to breathe.
She is gone.
She hates something she has onced love.
But i'm good on my feet.
Step by step forgetting the memories that onced fill me with happiness.
I am changed, new.
I am ready once more...
But yeah so here we go...

Answer 2

I lvoe it :D

Answer 3

thanks anyway i can improve?

Answer 4

As a fellow poet of free verse, i liked it! The only thing that i would change is maybe the last line, it kind of fell flat 4 me. However, if u think your poetry is great, don't let anybody tell u other wise :) Happy Writing!

Answer 5

Good

Answer 6

@emily776 took the words out of my mouth (: i really like it, but i would have had something different for the last line, but then again its not my work (: i do like it though.

Answer 7

thanks to all. i will consider a change maybe.