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OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

Summary We are introduced to Jonas, the eleven-year-old protagonist of the story, as he struggles to find the right word to describe his feelings as he approaches an important milestone. He rejects “frightened” as too strong a word, recalling a time when he had really been frightened: a year ago, an unidentified aircraft flew over his community—it was a strange and unprecedented event, since Pilots were not allowed to fly over the community. As Jonas remembers the community reaction to the event, we learn more about the society in which he lives. It is extremely structured, with official orders transmitted through loudspeakers planted all around the community. As a punishment, the pilot was “released” from the community—the worst fate that can befall a citizen. Jonas decides he is apprehensive, not frightened, about the important thing that is going to happen in December. Jonas and his society value the use of precise and accurate language. At dinner that night, Jonas’s family—his father, mother, and seven-year-old sister Lily—participate in a nightly ritual called “the telling of feelings.” Each person describes an emotion that he or she experienced during the day and discusses it with the others. Lily says she was angry at a child visiting from a nearby community who did not observe her childcare group’s play area rules. Her parents help her to understand that the boy probably felt out of place, and she becomes less angry. Jonas’s father, who is a Nurturer (he takes care of the community’s babies, or newchildren), describes his struggles with a slowly developing baby whose weakness makes it a candidate for release. The family considers taking care of the baby for a while, though they are not allowed to adopt him—every household is allowed only one male and one female child. We also learn that spouses are assigned by the government. Jonas explains his apprehensiveness about the coming Ceremony of Twelve—the time when he will be assigned a career and begin life as an adult. We learn that every December, all of the children in the community are promoted to the next age group—all four-year-old children become Fives, regardless of the time of year when they were actually born. We also learn that fifty children are born every year. The ceremonies are different for each age group. At the Ceremony of One newchildren, who have spent their first year at the Nurturing Center, are assigned to family units and given a name to use in addition to the number they were given at birth. Jonas’s father confesses to his family that he has peeked at the struggling newchild’s name—Gabriel—in the hopes that calling him a name will help the child develop more quickly. Jonas is surprised that his father would break any kind of rule, though the members of the community seem to bend rules once in a while. For instance, older siblings often teach younger siblings to ride bicycles before the Ceremony of Nine, when they receive their first official bicycles. Jonas’s parents reassure him that the Committee of Elders, the ruling group of the community, will choose a career for him that will suit him. The Committee members observe the Elevens all year, at school and play and at the volunteer work they are required to do after school, and consider each child’s abilities and interests when they make their selection. Jonas’s father tells him that when he was eleven, he knew he would be assigned the role of Nurturer, because it was clear that he loved newchildren and he spent all his volunteer hours in the Nurturing Center. When Jonas expresses concern about his friend Asher’s Assignment—he worries that Asher does not have any serious interests—his parents tell him not to worry, but remind him that after Twelve, he might lose touch with many of his childhood friends, since he will be spending his time with a new group, training for his job. Then Jonas’s sister Lily appears, asking for her “comfort object”—a community-issued stuffed elephant. The narrator refers to the comfort objects as “imaginary creatures. Jonas’s had been called a bear.”

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

@bngaure

OpenStudy (anonymous):

wow chica you werent kidding, um condense the first and second paragraph and ill do the third (:

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

But the second is sooo long lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok first and third then ill do second

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

k :)

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

what??

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

Omggggg @bngaure im soooo bad at summarizing -_- :(

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok i just started on it give me like 3 minutes

OpenStudy (anonymous):

me too LMFAO {=

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

ok.... thanks @bngaure I really appreciate it!!!!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Ok i summarized mainly in the first part since the last sentences are kind of vital. At dinner that night, the family participates in a nightly ritual called “the telling of feelings.” where each person describes an emotion that he or she experienced during the day and discusses it with the others. Lily talks about how she was was angry at a child visiting from a nearby community who didn't observe her childcare group’s play area rules. Then Jonas’s father, who is a Nurturer talks about his struggles with a slowly developing baby whose weakness makes it a candidate for release. Then the family considers taking care of the baby for a while, since they are not allowed to adopt him. The rule is every household is allowed only one male and one female child. We also learn that spouses are assigned by the government. Jonas explains his apprehensiveness about the coming Ceremony of Twelve—the time when he will be assigned a career and begin life as an adult. Every December, all of the children in the community are promoted to the next age group—all four-year-old children become Fives, regardless of the time of year when they were actually born. We also learn that fifty children are born every year. The ceremonies are different for each age group. At the Ceremony of One newchildren, who have spent their first year at the Nurturing Center, are assigned to family units and given a name to use in addition to the number they were given at birth. Jonas’s father confesses to his family that he has peeked at the struggling newchild’s name—Gabriel—in the hopes that calling him a name will help the child develop more quickly. Jonas is surprised that his father would break any kind of rule, though the members of the community seem to bend rules once in a while. For instance, older siblings often teach younger siblings to ride bicycles before the Ceremony of Nine, when they receive their first official bicycles.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Excuse the spacing btw i did it on notepad so its not really well written.

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

How do i summarize the 1st and third.... ?? idk how to summarize

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@Gabylovesyou please give @bngaure a medal for that :)

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

i did :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

=) spiffy

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Just take the sentences and shorten them to your own words like for example I say "The dog ran down the street, bit a little kid, jumped on an old lady and then was captured." You can say, "The dog was captured by the dog catcher after getting loose." Or something like that.

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

@bngaure for the first paragraph is this ok?? Jonas is narrating the most frightened day of his life when some flying object flew over his community.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yeah, you aren't going to get any more in depth? But thats good.

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

well what else can i put??

OpenStudy (anonymous):

maybe describe the society and how its structured

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

mmmmm ill just leave it like that lol im soo lazy..... for the last paragraph can you help??? i read it a million times but i dont get it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Its saying that his parents are reassuring him that wiss find a suitable career and that he is worrying about his friend too

OpenStudy (anonymous):

*woah i have no idea what i meant by wiss lol the committee of elders will find a suitable career

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

so what should i put ??

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You can say what i just said just give it more umph

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

Can you type it again ????? i got confused cuz since you messed up, idk what is right or wrong lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Mention how his parents are reassuring Jonas that the Elders will find an appropriate career.

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

His parents reassure him that the committee will find a suitable career

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Yeah but go a little more in depth like how he is stressing on that and his friend. I have to go ill be back on later.

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

OMG!!!! UR LEAVING!?!?!?!?!?!?! what time will u be back?????????????????

OpenStudy (anonymous):

who knows lol

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

lol I have to write a personal response

OpenStudy (anonymous):

good night i got to go to bed =)

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

nighty night night

OpenStudy (anonymous):

did you still need help?

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

i already submitted it...... thanks soooo much :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ok yw (: good luck!

OpenStudy (gabylovesyou):

thanks :)

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