Question

plz check this sentence for grammar
Beowulf became a king and was glorified, more than anyone else was in the world.

Answer 1

I think that should be ok... but not even close to 100% sure..
I would write it as:
Beowulf became a king and was glorified more than anyone else in the world.

Answer 2

I think Freyes' response is good, but I might write it this way: Beowulf became a king who was glorified more than anyone else in the world.

Answer 3

ok then thanku both :)

Answer 4

I like peachy's better. =P @Peachy947