Question

can someone spell-check this please??? thanks!

Answer 1

Dear Principial;

My name is Wayne, and I am a senior at Absegami. I wanted to bring up some ways to improve the school for future students.

Our school has a swim team and no swimming pool at the school. A pool on-site could be a gym class, no more busing to Brigantine to practice.

No homework on the weekends and school holidays. Parents take their kids away for vacations and don’t have time to do school/ homework. Books and work will end up getting lost.

The student bathrooms need to get cleaned more often because the kids keep messing up the bathrooms faster than they can be cleaned.

Thank you for listening to my concerns. You can contact me at my e-mail address.

Answer 2

Dear Principal;
My name is Wayne, and I am a senior at Absegami. I wanted to bring up some ways to improve the school for future students. Our school has a swim team and no swimming pool at the school. A pool on-site could be a gym class, no more busing to Brigantine to practice. No homework on the weekends and school holidays. Parents take their kids away for vacations and don’t have time to do school/ homework. Books and work will end up getting lost. The student bathrooms need to get cleaned more often because the kids keep messing up the bathrooms faster than they can be cleaned. Thank you for listening to my concerns. You can contact me at my e-mail address.

Answer 3

If i were you I would give it a little bit more "fluff" and id add the principals name. but everything else looks good. i paid close attention to make sure there were no spelling errors. i didnt see any. good luck with everything!

Answer 4

Agreeing with @hayley3394

Answer 5

ok! i will!!! THANX!!! :)