Question

Is anyone willing to proofread my 4 pages research paper? I'm desperate to find someone to proofread and I'm totally stressed out right now. ): Thank you!

Answer 1

btw, it is double spaced.

Answer 2

I wouldn't mind to help proof read it for you.

Answer 3

Here's the doc and thank you!
Sorry if my grammar is horrid. I'm super stressed out and doing other homework as well. I don't think have time to proofread all the mistakes I made.

Answer 4

Ok, give me just a bit, btw know the feeling on stressing over assignments

Answer 5

Thanks so much again!
I do not really like all my teachers giving out so much assignments that are due the week before finals.

Answer 6

Doctor Jack Kervorkian should have been spelled "Kevorkian", a few other misspellings, and I found a couple fragmented sentences, they may be a few more as I'm tired myself so I would recommend resting a bit and double checking once more before submitting it.

Answer 7

Thanks again.. Although, I'm looking back from the rough draft and I don't see the changes at all besides the name.

Answer 8

hang on ill paste here the changes i remember making so your know

Answer 9

Also, my grammar is terrible and I cannot really catch my mistakes. Alright and thanks

Answer 10

suicide is consider breaking
should be
suicide is considered breaking

greater physical and mental quality, and a lesser
should be
greater physical and mental quality and a lesser

However, the parent removed the tube away from her and result into her death.
should be
However, the parent removed the tube away from her and it resulted into her death.

society of today has deemed a terminally ill person as helpless and think that they are wasting other’s time.

should be
The society of today has deemed a terminally ill person as helpless and thinks that they are wasting their time.

Answer 11

The tube was removed so that she would die”(McManaman).
put a space between the ” and ( so it reads would die” (McManaman).

Answer 12

Ahh, okay. I see it now. Thank you so much again for proofreading.

Answer 13

your welcome, but please remember to double check, i'm not that great myself, and its 130am here, kinda tired myself after taking my exams, one thing i caught in rechecking might be in the references/cites at the bottom, Viewpoints In Context doesn't have a period there, cites im really no good at, but i noticed in most of yours in that section you have a period at the end of the line

Answer 14

and not after the last one, "Morris, Wanda "End of life." Globe & Mail 19 June 2012: A16. Gale Opposing Viewpoints In Context" do you need the period there?

Answer 15

I copied it from the article that had the citation I could copy from. So I don't know well as myself.

Answer 16

ah i see my mistake.. I think I did not copy it fully and just missed the period.

Answer 17

thats what i was thinking, check out this site http://www.easybib.com/ i actually just came across it a few minutes ago its looks pretty cool, the mla citing is free and does web sites books news papers etc