The following sentence is considered a fragment "Listening to the CD her sister had sent, Mia was overcome with a mix of emotions. Happiness, homesickness, nostalgia." What can I do to fix it.

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anonymous · Answer

The first sentence is not a fragment. The second one is. You can put the two together with a colon, but it will still not end right - you need to re-word or use more words.

anonymous · Answer

Yes, I figured it would look something like this "Listening to the CD her sister had sent, Mia was overcome with a mix of emotions: happiness,homesickness,nostalgia.", of course I might have to rearranged something, at this moment though I am stumped.

anonymous · Answer

Well I don't know what the sentence preceding this (proposed) one is about, but at least as far as this sentence goes, I think your main point is that Mia was overcome with mixed emotions. If that is the case, I would start the sentence so that the main point is active - thus: "Mia was overcome with emotions ranging from sublime happiness and wistful nostalgia to homesickness and outright despair as she..." - apologies, I got carried away. lol