Hi All, I have a sentence from a letter I need to edit and it is from a person that has a problem with a printer they bought. If someone could tell me if I have the sentence composed correctly, I would appreciate it. Also, any recommendations would be very welcome. Here is the sentence: I pointed out that; 1) it was his misrepresentation that had caused the problem, 2) I had relied on his know-how, and 3) the charge was totally unjustified.

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anonymous · Answer

I don't feel the numbers/bullets should be in there at all but that is how the instructor sent us the letter to edit it so I am trying to see if I should remove them or leave them also.  Among other problems I have with the "list". thanks again, denise

anonymous · Answer

it should actually be 2 sentences...
 
I pointed out that it was his misrepresentation that had caused the problem.
I had relied on his know-how, and the charge was totally unjustified.

also tell me what is wrong with his printer and I may be able to fix it ;)

anonymous · Answer

Oh thank you, so just do away with the numbers? I didn't like those in there at all.  This is an "editing" assignment is all, just fictitious.  Denise;)

anonymous · Answer

thank you again and I think I clicked the right button to add a medal to your collection;)