Question

Please help me with ideas!

Answer 1

Describe his physical attributes, age, face, eyes, posture, manner of dress etc.

Answer 2

@Agent_Sniffles

Answer 3

@ash2326 !

Answer 4

Yes @lala2 Try to describe in a way radar told

Answer 5

@ash2326 can You help me with how to describe an aging fathers eyes

Answer 6

whats a descriptive way to describe wise, dark chocolate, almond shaped eyes.

Answer 7

@ash2326??

Answer 8

Wise

Answer 9

yeah wise

Answer 10

Are you doing FLVS

Answer 11

no whats that

Answer 12

Anymore questions?

Answer 13

this is one of my sentences
His dark chocolate eyes are tender, wise, and very gentle , the same eyes that

Answer 14

I want to add how those gentle eyes are the same ones he used to talk serioously to me

Answer 15

or discipline me.. something like that

Answer 16

That sounds really good @Compassionate ! Could I use this!

Answer 17

Did you just write this?

Answer 18

@Compassionate

Answer 19

I wrote it myself. Feel free. I'll have to delete it so she doesn't trace it back, though. Go ahead and copy it. Let me know when you have it so I can delete it.

Answer 20

This is about my dad so I dont want to make him seem to old.. what Can I do

Answer 21

I copied it thanks!

Answer 22

Copy and paste what you have so far. I'll edit it to look more professional? :)

Answer 23

Yeah I copy and pasted thanks so much.. but yeah I dont want him to seem to old

Answer 24

I had an idea! I want to add how as i have grown up I haven't really thought about how my dad was also growing... Do you get what Im trying to say

Answer 25

As I grow my daddy does also... Is that a little more clear

Answer 26

I understand. Give me a second to write something.

Answer 27

ok!

Answer 28

Some Typos I made.
"His skin DAMAGED" not Damage.

"Father." <-- PERIOD. Not a Comma.

Answer 29

This sounds FANTASTIC! I pasted it already! The only thing is that its a descriptive essay so it wants alot of description!

Answer 30

Hmm... Did I not give enough description?

Answer 31

I LOVE the last paragraph! You are right there id alot of description. I had not yet finished reading it

Answer 32

*is

Answer 33

It sounds great! I love it!

Answer 34

:) Can I delete it now? Have you pasted it?

Answer 35

You can erase it!

Answer 36

Anything else?

Answer 37

um I wanted to write about what makes him unique Im not sure how to be descriptive about that! any ideas?

Answer 38

What are some things he did for you that you feel no one can compare to?

Answer 39

He loves his family, he is the one that taught me to smile and be happy. he cares about others and loves to give!

Answer 40

He is a loving husband and Fantastic father

Answer 41

>carbon dioxide should NOT be capital. Oops.

Answer 42

ahh that sounds so nice!

Answer 43

Did you paste it?

Answer 44

Yeah thanks!

Answer 45

You are an excellent writer!

Answer 46

I pasted it!

Answer 47

Hmm. Thanks. I'm a bit tired. But you need anything else?

Answer 48

I think im ok for now! will you be on tommorrow around the same time?

Answer 49

Probably. I gave you more than 5 paragraphs. Shouldn't that be enough for an essay?

Answer 50

Yeah! it probably will be! Thanks again for all the help!

Answer 51

Welcome