Question

hows this poem?

Answer 1

I sit here as the blood drips from my hands
Trying to remember why it has happen.
Glass scattered all over the floor.
Mirror is split, and just like me,
The pieces that make it whole
Are all gone and lost.
I, still trembling from the hit, ask myself
Why?
Does the image of me in the mirror bother myself that much?
I may have broken the mirror and not myself yet
But the glass still is sharp.

Answer 2

thats very outgoing,different,emotional, and very good..

Answer 3

Trying to remember why it has happen(ed)

I wish I could appreciate poetry more, but I like this one.

Answer 4

im not really much of the one to choice the works to flow out. i prefer words that are more "block" but thanks.

Answer 5

Good poem bro. Takes a real man to show emotion like that.

Answer 6

poems are the best thing, because its like a song, u say everything and emotion u have in u, i love poetry, and i read and write poetry all the time, but i hate sharing my own, because i feel like no matter what, my emotions are always hiding beneath the words, and when i write poetry it doesn't express half of what i really feel, ur poetry radiates everything with emotion, and for real, it takes a true person to write like that, ur poem is amazing, and thats an understatement, lol sorry for this lonq paragraph.

Answer 7

Good job! I think that whenever you write it really puts the reader in your place, seeing what you see, feeling how you feel...