Question

Could someone proofread my paper, please?

Answer 1

- writing letters, and be able understand
^Should be to be able OR being able. :)

Answer 2

- in nonpolitical organization like the church
should be organizationS

Answer 3

That's alll I have time for! Sorry! I'll try and come backkk!!

Answer 4

Ok, thanks!

Answer 5

could you also check this one two, please?

Answer 6

rights era blacks enthusiasm
^ It should be black's enthusiasm.

But I really wouldn't reccomend using black at all. Try African American.

Answer 7

-- As result, this left black mainly
As A result, this left blacks mainly

Answer 8

--Nevertheless, church void of civic skills in blacks by providing leadership development in position of deacons, chairs for men and women committee for the church , and trustee.
^ I don't understand this sentence, bu maybe it's just mee.

Answer 9

-church gradual learned how to navigate
^ grudaly.
and learns, would fit better in this sentencd.

Answer 10

-- important to black at that
^ to THE black or blackS

Answer 11

-- The data display African Americans

^ The data displayed or displays.

And you used African Americans here, wich you need to do all along!! It's just BETTER. Trust me :)
And for whites... just use White Americans or something like it. :)

Answer 12

That's all I can find in the first one :)
Hope I helped!!!

Answer 13

FOR THE 2ND ONE, THE INTERVIEW -

- - - most importantly the country future.
^ the Country's future

- - - These survey gives sense on level
^ These serveyS give

Answer 14

- Thesis statement: If blacks youth who lack civic skills due to external factors attend church on a regularly bases different civic skills will developed which will lead to productive civic engagement.

= I would say - If African American youth members who lack civic skills
or something in that mannor.

Answer 15

--- certain extent still exist today is effort in mobilizing
^^Comma after today

Answer 16

---, beside social media efforts,

besideS

Answer 17

Of course, I don't know what this essay is for and/or the purpus of the about. But in some parts it seemed to be bashing church... wich I didn't get, and is NOT good.
But that could just be how I read it.
And I HIGHTLYYYYYYYY reccomend using African Americans!!! :)
I hope I helped in some way!! Good luck & God bless!

Answer 18

Actually I approving the church to be an environment in fostering civic engagement specifically for African American

Answer 19

Thanks for checking my paper

Answer 20

Oh, God bless ya too!

Answer 21

Oh ok, good! :)
Like I said, I didn't really knoww about it. lol
Good job though!!!
Np, and thank you!!! :)