Would anyone like to read my story. Its a fanfic but its still not bad...i think. Well here is the link if you would like to read it(: and maybe give me ideas on what i can do next, i'm having a bit of trouble.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/4757858-a-chance-at-love

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Would anyone like to read my story. Its a fanfic but its still not bad...i think. Well here is the link if you would like to read it(: and maybe give me ideas on what i can do next, i'm having a bit of trouble.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/4757858-a-chance-at-love

anonymous · Answer

I can't read it right now, but I will when I'm done with this mountain of homework. :D Sounds like a promising read :D

anonymous · Answer

nice one but i'd lyk to say plz don't use abusive words in ur essays.. i hope u no. d word i'm talkin about!!

anonymous · Answer

@NeoCipher790 Well i hope you like it(: @ashley007 im not sure what you are talking about actually. Its not an essay, its just a story i started writing.

anonymous · Answer

not a bad read but you need to watch your grammar and sentence structure. on the next chapters remember that only one of ! an ? this is enough.

anonymous · Answer

my grammar? like what?

anonymous · Answer

"And in the years that I have known him he was NEVER been late" - this is the first thing that i saw. if it looks good to you. i will leave it be. but there is a way to make it sound better.

anonymous · Answer

What can i do? i see that i put was rather than has, what else?

anonymous · Answer

I have known him all my life and not once did he come late - this is my version and this is yours  if you like it, keep it. - And in the years that I have known him he never have been late

anonymous · Answer

okay thanks(: