Question

I see u sittin all alone alone
and wish you would cheer up and come home
cause there's no better place for friend as brilliant as you
so come come on let me hold your hand
and come on why don't you let me in
in to your heart baby

i think the word would mean nothing if you wasn't there
and this gift that u game me on my birthday is just a plain old box if your not there
come on let me in
in to your heart baby
come on let me in
in to your thoughts baby
i wanna know what you know
i wanna feel what u feel come on now
baby why don't you let me in

Answer 1

<3

Answer 2

i need yalls opinion about this. should i keep writing or should i move on to something else.....it might seem better if u knew the beat but.....i have no idea how to show the beat so :P

Answer 3

KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 4

lol u really think i should??

Answer 5

yes!! lol

Answer 6

oh i didnt think it was that good

Answer 7

IT IS!

Answer 8

well i wrote this randomly as it came to mind so thx ^-^ lol

Answer 9

np :)

Answer 10

lol i dont think when i write songs :P i just write what pops up

Answer 11

yea it is really good if i say that then it is good lol

Answer 12

lol thx

Answer 13

no problem

though it needs some adjustments jk jk its amazing

Answer 14

hmmmm i might really need some changes....

Answer 15

like what?

Answer 16

idk..

Answer 17

yea u do

Answer 18

no...i dont lol

Answer 19

o wow dont i feel stupid lol

Answer 20

DONT CHANGE ANYHTING!!!

Answer 21

yea dont change it like @RoxxisaUNICORN said

Answer 22

mkay mkay i wont.....but i still gotta finish it