Question

Can you please help me improve my poem? I need to have at least 4 literary devices in it.

Answer 1

This is not a poem of woe
But instead of how one can overthrow
The feeling of sorrow
Because there’s always tomorrow

A daughter to my mother and father
A sister to my brother
Desires for me to be successful
But it can be stressful

My reputation is at stake
When I make a mistake
And as I fall
I just want to curl into a ball

I am always there for many
But some leave my heart empty
There are friends who see me excel
That want to bring me down as well

As I watch myself struggle in dismay
I kneel down and pray
And when no one cares
I seek help from the Man upstairs
He hears me weep
And tells me I am not the black sheep

This is not a poem of woe
But instead of how one can overthrow
The feeling of sorrow
Because there’s always tomorrow