Question

please help

Answer 1

please help writing a poem that can aalso be written as a song

Answer 2

@Falco276 @Ell @saifoo.khan @Compassionate @april115

Answer 3

Hmmmm, not so sure on this one.
I'll try my best! :D

Answer 4

im really lost and i still have no lyrics

Answer 5

Do you have anything started? (: Whats it about?

Answer 6

i have one line:

your my angel

Answer 7

Can it rhyme? (:

Answer 8

Ell has a good point there. :)

Answer 9

Haha^^ thanx(:

Answer 10

yw :)
but back to Tahmina's question, gee, I think it's kinda ..... hmmm wait.

Answer 11

brb. :)

Answer 12

Is there a specific topic it is about @Tahmina ?

Answer 13

How long does the poem need to be?

Answer 14

You're my angel
I'll always hold you near

I got your back
I'll catch every tear

So sweet you are
and have little fear

I'll never leave my angel
I will never disappear

....Off the top of my head(: Hope you like it! (:

Answer 15

theres no topic and it has to be atleast 6 stanzas with 4 lines each

Answer 16

http://images.wikia.com/the-gt-forums/images/a/ac/Gay-walrus-meme.jpg

Answer 17

lol

Answer 18

it has to be a song/ poem that has the rythm of stronger

Answer 19

:)

Answer 20

or i have another song called fight

i want tofight
fight through color
fight through war

blah blah i need help continueing


which one should i pick?

Answer 21

You're my angel
I'll rip your insides out
Tear every angle
Leave you ripped and mangled

I sold my soul to Satan
The seed of evil is me
Feel my evil hatred
Tear your eye so you can't see

Kiss the lips of Hitler
We must murder the Jews
Oh dear- come hither
I swear I'll kill you!

The angels have all fallen
Hail master Stalin
No more remain above
Hail Hitler - 666 our love

I want to fight
Fur die reich!
I want them to die!
Fur ihr rache!

In the blood of aborted fetuses I bathe
In the blood of dead Jews I pray
That Satan taketh the rats away
So our Dark Lord rules the world one day.

Answer 22

what is this supposed to be?

Answer 23

It's your poetry/song, dear.

Answer 24

I decided to take a more metal approach. ;)

Answer 25

please dont

Answer 26

ur scaring me

Answer 27

Y-you don't like it.

Answer 28

yup thats how i am

Answer 29

I think the fight one would be easier to do, b/c you could make it fast pace/upbeat :P

Answer 30

@Compassionate , that is a bit scary X(

Answer 31

okay fight it is


i waaaaaanna fight
fight through life

Answer 32

I waaaaaana fight
fight tonight

Answer 33

thats what i have so far

Answer 34

oh i want to fight through life life liiiife

Answer 35

I will fight!
Feel my fight!
I won't die
Until tonight!

For valor and glory
For Stalingrad!
For an epic story
Oh - am I glad!

Until the end of time
Shall bravery prevail
Until all land is mine
Shall I conquer Hell!

During the night or day
Not a single moment shall waste away
Shall I continue forevermore
And lay down my sword nevermore

Justice will rein
And pour from the sky
Shall honor rain
Throughout our time

So O' band of brothers
We will continue to fight
To protect one-another
To protect their lives

I-I wrote this for you. .. T-tahmina-San...

Answer 36

>I will fight
>For my rights

NOT "FEEL MY FIGHT!" :(((((

Answer 37

Haha(: thats better @Compassionate
I also have one of my own I created along time ago, you can take it if you'd like:

Life:
When life shoves you down
Don't give it a frown
Lift your heat up
And give it your best

Don't show it no fear
For it inst the king
Look it in the eye and say
"My Game"

You're not gonna win
You're not gonna loose
Give it a flower and
See how that goes

Life inst unplanned
Its a wonderful gift
And sometimes people
Don't deserve that shift

Things can get rough
Times will be tough
Always remember
Times will be better

When life shoves you down
Don't give it a frown
Keep your head high and
Live it your best

You may or may not like it, but that is okay
Hope this helped!! :)

Answer 38

i love @Ell

Answer 39

can this be turned into a song?

Answer 40

haha(: thanx, im pretty sure it can, you just have to find the right melody (:

Answer 41

please help with that

Answer 42

I just did, play around with it for a bit and see what you get:P

Look up the song here we go again by Demi Lovato...use that beat and put it into this song/poem.
From your not gonna win....to dont deserve that shift would be the chorus...
Hope this helps!

Answer 43

where it says "lift your heat up"....heat is supposed to be head:P sorry!

Answer 44

thansk sooooo much

Answer 45

np! ggod luck! GBU!! <3 :)

Answer 46

*good

Answer 47

gbu too