Question

Tyshawn’s plan to climb all of the “Fourteeners” in one summer was hampered when she broke her leg in a softball game.
Is this sentence correct? If so, choose “No change is necessary.” If not, determine which answer choice correctly fixes the error.

Answer 1

A. To climb all of the “Fourteeners” in one summer, Tyshawn’s plan was hampered when she broke her leg in a softball game.

B. Tyshawn’s plan in a softball game to climb all of the “Fourteeners” in one summer was hampered when she broke her leg.

C.In a softball game, Tyshawn’s plan to climb all of the “Fourteeners” was hampered.

D.No change is necessary.

Answer 2

So, do you see nay error?

Answer 3

@e.mccormick I think it's D.

Answer 4

Yah, the others seem to have the errors.

To climb all of the “Fourteeners” in one summer, Tyshawn’s plan was hampered when she broke her leg in a softball game. \(\leftarrow\) Out of order. That start would mean it movified how they were hampered!

Tyshawn’s plan in a softball game to climb all of the “Fourteeners” in one summer was hampered when she broke her leg. \(\leftarrow\) How can you plan in one game for the whole summer?

In a softball game, Tyshawn’s plan to climb all of the “Fourteeners” was hampered. \(\leftarrow\) OK, not great, but OK. It also misses the how of the hampering. So not better than the original.