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OpenStudy (aonz):

Can i rephrase this? Or does it make sense? In essence, it is through the extensive use of techniques portrayed by the composers through dialogue of characters, has the human nature such as values and ideas, been successfully identified.

HanAkoSolo (jamierox4ev3r):

I believe this is a run-on sentence... You're beginning, " In essence, it is through the extensive use of techniques portrayed by the composers through dialougue of characters,...." and the rest needs to be reworded somehow

HanAkoSolo (jamierox4ev3r):

I get what you are trying to say though @AonZ

HanAkoSolo (jamierox4ev3r):

you could add a semicolon and then say, "the human nature, such as values and ideas, have been successfully identified." That is one possible way to fix this problem. I hope this helped! :)

OpenStudy (aonz):

Yea, i think that would make it sound better :) Thanks for your time to help

HanAkoSolo (jamierox4ev3r):

lol no problem :)

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