Can i rephrase this? Or does it make sense? In essence, it is through the extensive use of techniques portrayed by the composers through dialogue of characters, has the human nature such as values and ideas, been successfully identified.
I believe this is a run-on sentence... You're beginning, " In essence, it is through the extensive use of techniques portrayed by the composers through dialougue of characters,...." and the rest needs to be reworded somehow
I get what you are trying to say though @AonZ
you could add a semicolon and then say, "the human nature, such as values and ideas, have been successfully identified." That is one possible way to fix this problem. I hope this helped! :)
Yea, i think that would make it sound better :) Thanks for your time to help
lol no problem :)
Join our real-time social learning platform and learn together with your friends!