what's wrong with this sentence? Not to mention the amazing embellishments that are sure to spark the interest of our well-healed clients: flowers, butterflies, crystals, and feathers.”

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anonymous · Answer

Is this the full sentence? If so, it's a fragment. Additionally, I am unclear on the use of the term well-healed. Are you a therapy facility? If the intent is to indicate wealth or prosperity of the clientele, then the correct term is "well-heeled" or you could substitute "affluent" as an alternative. Hope that helps!

anonymous · Answer

Thank you very much for your help. I didn't write the full question but it says that there are two things wrong with this sentence. Maybe you can help me with the second mistake. Thanks again!

anonymous · Answer

Okay - 1st: fragment. 2nd: healed misspelled should be heeled :0D You're welcome!

anonymous · Answer

Can you be specific on how it's a fragment sentence and what the new sentence would be.

anonymous · Answer

The fact that it cannot stand alone and make sense makes it a fragment, or just part of a sentence. So if you were to correct it, you could have it read something like this: "We offer some amazing embellishments like flowers, butterflies, crystals and feathers that will spark the interest of our well-heeled clients."