Question

Correct the following paragraph so that it uses the right words and includes appropriate apostrophes.

Yesterday, my friends went to the cite of a world-famous puppy park with their dogs. Theyre dogs tails were wagging so quickly they looked like helicopters! It was adorable. Once they were their, the dogs got to run around and play while the people talked about there favorite animals. Yesterday was a lot of fun for dog lovers.

Answer 1

I think I got t hem all
Yesterday, my friends went to the site of a world-famous puppy park with their dogs. Their dogs' tails were wagging so quickly they looked like helicopters! It was adorable. Once they were there, the dogs got to run around and play while the people talked about their favorite animals. Yesterday was a lot of fun for dog lovers.

Answer 2

Okay so 'theyre' needs an apostrophe because theyre is 2 words joined together, a conjunction. They are. So it would be they're. <- their is incorrect because it's a possessive word. It would have to be 'there'. So the sentence would be "Once they were there," the second part of the sentence needs correction also, the part "the people talked about there favorite animals." there is like saying "my phone is over there." distance or a place. So the correct word would be their.

So the paragraph would be "Yesterday, my friends went to the cite of a world-famous puppy park with their dogs. "They're" dogs tails were wagging so quickly they looked like helicopters! It was adorable. Once they were there, the dogs got to run around and play while the people talked about their favorite animals. Yesterday was a lot of fun for dog lovers."

Answer 3

nevermind bibby gots it XD

Answer 4

ohh ok but thank you so much

Answer 5

No way. You're actually explaining the difference between the different flavors of there/their/they're

Great job panda

Answer 6

I made the mistake of saying "they're dogs tails" it's their. xD

Answer 7

Thank bibby XD >.>

Answer 8

yeah i fix it thinx

Answer 9

You're welcome ^-^

Answer 10

yeah