Question

I need help on my essay. Please. the first page is the question, next is my stuff. Not urgent.

Answer 1

read it :)

Answer 2

@e.mccormick if you have time, please check my grammar and idea. I don't want to bother others by posting a new post. Pretty sure there is no help there. The first page is the question from my prof, next is my stuff.

Answer 3

Idea was great. Gammar needed notes.

Answer 4

dang i wanted to throw in some ideas for this essaay is it too late

Answer 5

You still can comment. Not like anything is preventing you! Well, other than you.

Answer 6

@dan815 what is your comment?

Answer 7

you want to rewrite a new essay!?

Answer 8

nope, tomorrow is due day. But i can change it if your idea is better than mine.

Answer 9

hmmm okk

Answer 10

dan, it's my real experience, not fiction

Answer 11

i know

Answer 12

"I know?" how?

Answer 13

I too feel this double conciousness

Answer 14

I ve been dealing with it

Answer 15

I want to defeat it

Answer 16

ah, since you are Indian

Answer 17

not for that reason

Answer 18

so what happen?

Answer 19

I just hate caring about what others think about me

Answer 20

its my own pride that makes me care about what others think about me

Answer 21

I want to become a humble man

Answer 22

dan, they didn't "think", they did hurt others

Answer 23

who I am is not defined by what others perceive me as, Who I am is who God says I am

Answer 24

so I dont want to think about how others perceive me

Answer 25

but I continue you to do so, and it stops me from being myself

Answer 26

dan, I don't understand your sentence : "I continue you to do so" what does it mean?

Answer 27

but I continue to do so *

Answer 28

ok, clearer

Answer 29

It is a process though!

Answer 30

everytime my nature of the flesh wants to act out in the intentions of saving face or my reputation I force myself to do the opposite thing, What I thought would be embarrassing I do that instead! This way I keep dying to myself little by little!! until a day will come where I will no longer be controlled by it

Answer 31

I become dead to myself!

Answer 32

dan, you sounds bitter than you who I knew