Question

I NEED AN EXPERT that can help me!!!
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Answer 1

\[I~~~~have~~~~an~~~~Introduction~~~~and~~~~2~~~~Body~~~~paragraphs.\]

\[I~~~~am~~~~describing~~~~a~~~~scene~~~~from~~~~Beowulf.\]

The battle between Grendel and Beowulf.
Grendel is a demon that has killed many people and many people attempted to kill him. Grendel has always been a threat to the life to the people, he had been ruining and destroying everything their properties and possessions and defeating any attempt to fight back. King Hrothgar ordered Beowulf and the Geats to fight Grendel, and now they arrived to Heorot, and they are spending a night there. Beowulf, as opposed to other people that attempted to kill Grendel didn't wear any armor and didn't use a weapons. He bragged that he is the strongest on earth and that he could defeat Grendel without using weapons and armor, and not in vain.
As Beowulf and the Geats are slipping in the hall planning to attack Grendel the next day, however Grendel attacks them first. He enters the hall cowardly and basely without giving them any chances to prepare. He wants to kill all of them before they can even try to do anything about it. Grendel cruelly and unsparingly enters the hall and devours one of the Beowulf's men. After devouring one the Geats, Grendel reaches out to snatch up Beowulf, however Beowulf leaps up and grabs his arm.
Grendel is terrified, he sees that he met the strongest man he has ever seen. Now Grendel repents, he isn't thinking of fighting anymore he wants to run for his life, but it's too late. Grendel attempts to free himself from Beowulf's grip, but he can't, Beowulf, the strongest on earth, victoriously finishes the fight by tearing Grendel's arm off his body. Grendel runs home to the swamps to die.

\[Can~~~~you~~~~give~~~~me~~~~an~~~~advice?\]
\[What~~~~details~~~~can~~~~I~~~~add?~~~~~~~Also~~~~please~~~~help~~~~me~~~~on~~~~my\]\[conclusion~~~~paragraph.\]

Answer 2

@Hero, @ganeshie8, @Nurali, @hba

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Answer 3

Also point out my mistakes, I see one at the beginning,
line 2.
him. Grendel has always been a threat to the life \(\color{red}{of}\) the people, he had been ruining

Answer 4

" The battle between Grendel and Beowulf." Is this supposed to be a title or the start of your description??

Answer 5

If it's a title, why does it have a period? If it's supposed to be part of the description, the way it's worded doesn't sound right to me.

Answer 6

Grendel is a demon that has killed many people and many people attempted to kill him.

Answer 7

Needs comma

Answer 8

And I always thought Grendel was a Woman. Oh well.

Answer 9

It is a title
Can you give me a couple of advice on how to conclude it, and what details to add to what i have?

Answer 10

@kittiwitti1 @tbtaron
they could help u.

Answer 11

ty, ikram002p

Answer 12

@SolomonZelman you should tag her, lol
& I don't have time right now but as soon as I do, I'll try to help you.