help me check for grammar and punctuations and spelling?
For instance, in Stones essay “Web of Risk” they talk about how the guard "loves to antagonize students and needs to be eliminated."(432) Brad Stone mentions that the guard liked to bully students online and that wrote some intimidating and threatening comments on some students Facebook page. People do not know how to find a solution to their own personal problems so they hurt innocent people.

Question

help me check for grammar and punctuations and spelling?
For instance, in Stones essay “Web of Risk” they talk about how the guard "loves to antagonize students and needs to be eliminated."(432) Brad Stone mentions that the guard liked to bully students online and that wrote some intimidating and threatening  comments on some students Facebook page. People do not know how to find a solution to their own personal problems so they hurt innocent people.

anonymous · Answer

i tink there should be another comma after essay, not for certain
Stone's 
 in this sentence: {{Brad Stone mentions that the guard liked to bully students online and that wrote some intimidating and threatening  comments on some students Facebook page}} i would remove "that" or put he after that.
students'