Question

Growing up education has always been the main factor in my family . Throughout the years things haven't been easy. When I was 6 years old my mother and father divorced . My mother supported my brother and I on her own . Not having a stable income things where rough. Going threw these tough times taught me how to be independent and without education I can not succeed in life . Realizing this made me pursue bigger and better things which motivated me to achieve my goals in life .


It feels like I went of topic a little bit and is this a enough there is a 250 word max
PLEASE HELP !

Answer 1

@thomaster

Answer 2

@zepdrix

Answer 3

I restructured the paragraph and you should always spell out numbers because it adds to your word count. I am also attaching some information for you use. The word count is up to 151 words. You need to come up with an ending that will close out the paragraph. Hope this helps you.
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When do you capitalize words like "mother," "father," "grandmother," and "grandfather" when writing about them?

You should capitalize these when referring to your own relatives: Hello, Mother. A good rule to follow is to capitalize them if they are used as proper nouns. If used as common nouns, don't capitalize as in: We honor all mothers in May. In other words, capitalize words such as "Mother," "Father," "Grandmother," "Grandfather," "Son," "Daughter," and "Sis" when they are used in place of the person's name. Do not capitalize them when they follow possessive pronouns such as her, his, my, our, your.
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When I was six years old, my Mother and Father divorced. My Mother supported my Brother and I on her own. Throughout the years things haven't been easy for any of us. Seeing my Mother struggle to provide for our needs helped me to value her efforts and she emphasized the importance of education. I also came to learn that through the tough times that independence was important and that the way to gain that was through going to school to higher my education after High School. I saw that I needed to achieve this in order to succeed in life without being reliant on someone else. Watching my Mother made me want bigger and better things that motivated this decision. I have a great opportunity to pursue an education in what interests me so that I may enjoy what I do and not have to do something just to survive.

Answer 4

sorry. The one part is suppose to say, "and that the way to gain independence was through going to school..." You get it?

Answer 5

Thank you so much !

Answer 6

Anytime