Question

Which sounds better?

Your eyes changed like your heart
So vague so dry
The love is gone
There’s nothing left inside

or

Your eyes changed like your heart
So vague so dry
The love is gone
Buried deep and left to die.

Answer 1

The first one. (:

Answer 2

First one sounds better :>

Answer 3

i like the first one better too!

Answer 4

Kind of agree, first one too..

Answer 5

First one *-*

Answer 6

I like the second one better, it offers a chance of bringing back a love that has been buried and forgotten about. I feel like the second one has a little bit more meaning than the first.

Answer 7

Your eyes changed like your heart
So vague so dry
The love is gone
There’s nothing left inside

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Try:

Your eyes change with your heart
So vague and dry
Ours; your love is gone
Nothing is left inside

Answer 8

Your eyes changed like your heart
So vague so dry
The love is gone
Buried deep and left to die.

Answer 9

Your eyes change like the sun changes to day
your heart opens when you love
your eyes dont change anymore
your heart doesnt open
your love is gone
its buried deep and left to die

Answer 10

Buried deep and left to die sounds much better it feels makes you feel more hollow like you dug a grave for it 20 feet down and buried it. Like there isnt a chance for their heart to come back its permanent almost. Or you could take the approach where its buried deep but i can still be saved. Their heart, the entity they once where and their integrity can be brought back to light dug up and can flourish. There are many ways you can take the second phrase

There's nothing left inside just makes me think of a 15 year old abandoned house with the windows boarded up and the paint peeling off the house's exterior and its posture is becoming dilapidated.

Answer 11

i love the second one but the first ones good too!

Answer 12

Okay, Thank You. All of you!!! I'll post the finish poem later.

Answer 13

Second one.