Question

Anyone good with limericks?
(Medal & Fan)

Answer 1

I need help on one I am writing for world lit.
This is what I have,

There once was a fellow named Tim.
He had a crush on a girl named Kim.
He dressed up nice no doubt,
And he asked her out
Now Tims going out with Kim.

Am I doing it right? Is it good?

Answer 2

I think it is good but not good at it!!! Sorry.

Answer 3

Limerick: a humorous, frequently bawdy, verse of three long and two short lines rhyming aabba, popularized by Edward Lear.
everything looks good except you have an extra syllable in the third line...

REVISED:
There once was a fellow named Tim.
Who had a crush on a girl named Kim.
He dressed nice no doubt,
And he asked her out
Now Tim's going out with Kim.

Answer 4

Omg thank you so much! You have no idea how much this helps me. :)

Answer 5

No trouble at all! I love English.... especially word stuff like this. :)