Question

I need help describing something in my story so If you can help me please tell me and then I will tell you the question.

Answer 1

Sure, I can try.

Answer 2

@caryn so i need help describing my main character (girl) and her crush (boy) kissing but i dont want it to be too descriptive i pretty much want it to be implied that they kiss and get caught by someone.

Answer 3

Oh.

Answer 4

@linda3

Answer 5

Ive never described a scene like that before I mainly just write about supernatural stuff nothing romantic.

Answer 6

Cool, I'm a book editor. And I'm also in the midst of writing a book right now.

Answer 7

I'm going to restart after I finish school though, so it's on standby.

Answer 8

Awesome! Well hope you have fun writing it. (: I am writing a book at the moment and I am stuck in the romantic parts. Question, do you know if there are any colleges in the US that offer creative writing? I saw one once but lost the website link. ):

Answer 9

She looked deep into his dashing blue eyes as he pulled her close. All sorts of thoughts were racing through her head. but before she knew it, their lips touched and everything in her mind went blank. She could no longer recognize everything around her. The whole world seemed to disappear and it was far too late for her to notice that the one person she feared most to know about her secret love standing there watching....

Answer 10

I'm sure we can find out.

Answer 11

Wow, that's... well... good.

Answer 12

lol.... I hate romantic scenes in stories... they always make me laugh for some odd reason, but he I don't know sometimes you gotta face them in life :P I'm writing several stories.... :D

Answer 13

Thank you and haha ikr! I dont really get why they seem funny :P

Answer 14

Yeah, I've come to terms that to have a good story, you usually have to have a love story entwined somehow...

Answer 15

yeah...it's funny cause the story I'm doing right now called, "Glory Days', is a love story- I seem to always go against my own words :p lol

Answer 16

:P

Answer 17

My Book is called "Normal Hero."

Answer 18

I cant write romantice stories xD It woud be a complete disaster thats why I just stick to horror, action, and supernatural/paranormal stories.

Answer 19

Here's what I've written so far.

Answer 20

Have you ever heard of the site called writerscafe or wattpad? It's an online site where you can post your stories.

Answer 21

Yep, but I want my book published by Puffin Books or something.

Answer 22

I'm Still trying to figure that out...

Answer 23

I know wattpad but I want to get them officially published thats why I dont post on there.

Answer 24

Same :P

Answer 25

haha.. well once you guys are done with your writing you can come to me, I'm an illustrator at Candlewick Press I can probably hook you guys up.

Answer 26

yeah very true. :D

Answer 27

Awesome!

Answer 28

Cool! well I have to go bye thank you guys (:

Answer 29

Tell me what you think of my book Linda!

Answer 30

okay! :)

Answer 31

Thnx :P

Answer 32

I'll be here :P

Answer 33

Booky my computer wont view the document :(
If I pmed you my email could you send it to me through there?

Answer 34

sure

Answer 35

Done.

Answer 36

This is what I used for my short story, "Fate's Mistakes". It was just for my school assignment so you could fill in the blanks with the places and characters names

“It’s getting late,” Una glanced at his watch. They stood quietly up to go and then Walter grabbed Una’s hand before she could go. Blushing he said, “I love you, too.” They leaned in to kiss just as Nan and the good Doctor were coming back through Rainbow Valley. The doctor had a confused ‘this-is-even-weirder’ look on his face as he continued down the path. As their lips met Nan crept quietly by, smiling to herself as she murmured, “Finally.” Finally the quiet, dreamy boy with tortured memories of war and the shy, sweet girl with horrible nightmares of long ago had found a kindred spirit in one another.

If you want you can read my full short story. What do you think? I'm only thirteen years old so please don't be too harsh on me.

Answer 37

interesting.