ITT: Critique my work. It's a short story for my literature class. Go to my last comment with an attachment.
It's unfinished btw
@Compassionate
Are you allowed to have all upper-case letters like: “EMMA’S A 20 YEAR OLD GIRL. IN GREECE. ANCIENT GREECE. Her situation takes precedence!” yelled Olivia. “What is so hard to understand about that?” I thought the exclamation mark already means you are yelling/excited about something.
I dunno. It's added emphasis, and I don't think there's anything wrong with having it in dialogue, but I'll ask my teacher about that tomorrow.
Okay cool, other than that I think it is good, though English is not my forte so probably wait around for someone else :-).
K :P It's a continuation of a 9th grade history project that my friend and I did, but I'm not sure if I still have any of the old scripts.
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I hate it, it's bad, go back to english 101.
joking i didnt read yet
hue. Lemme know what you think when you're done tho ;)
"20 year old girl"
wat
interesting keep going... i like so far curious about what will happen as the story progresses.
Thanks :3 I kinda have to keep going though. No choice :p
thats great then
Yes indeedly doo. Shouldn't be too long before more gets added on tho.
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