Question

No more fear guys

Answer 1

Im through with it and im tired of living in it

Answer 2

Not living in Fear: Im through with living in fear, im through being afraid of dying.

Im not going to be afraid of rejection, im tired of everyone saying they are going to kill, or go crap yourself.

You know what im not afraid of them, not afraid of bullies or jerks.

You want a piece of me come to my address, you want to harm me come and try it.

Bring all your friends stop hiding behind a computer and tell it to my face, stop insulting my race just because im black.

And im lacking to meet up to your standards crap them, crap your opinion of me, and crap your words.

Because im not afraid to stand up to you or anyone else, if you got some balls then come face me.

Iv had enough and im fed up with it so go ahead give me the middle finger, Want to kill me then ill give you my address because I guarantee you ain’t got any balls to do it.

Everyone take a stand with me and rise up above fear don’t let it dominate you, or it can destroy you so take a stand with me.

I said get up out of your chairs and rise up and say it with me, I WILL NOT BE AFRAID ANYMORE, I WILL NOT FEAR DEATH, I WILL NOT BE AFRAID OF BULLIES, I WILL NOT BE AFRAID OF JERKS, KILLERS, RAPIST OR CRIMINALS!!!!!!!!!!!

I WILL NOT LIVE IN FEAR ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 3

How you ever thought of putting it on youtube, but with you rapping? Or have you?

Answer 4

I have but i need a mic

Answer 5

I see

Answer 6

nice

Answer 7

Hbb your looking at my music this is a surprise?

Answer 8

It looks good.

Answer 9

you need to write less literal, it's very childish and immature (not trying to be rude) write metaphorically instead of being direct, that induces a deeper meaning it into your lyricism without having to change the structure/flow/meaning.

Answer 10

Thanks for the advice

Answer 11

Try to rhmy a but and keep a rythm in your music

Answer 12

Its a song not a rap

Answer 13

i know so add some rythm

Answer 14

You should do that, that would be a great rap to put on Youtube! You would get like a 1,000 likes.

Answer 15

reading over this again, there is some SERIOUS improvement that needs to be made. no matter how I read it there is like no flow. Not hating, just saying I don't really think you sat down and wrote this and dedicated a lot of time to it, I think you threw it together so you could post something on here.

Answer 16

I was just saying that personally I would love to hear this song on a rap or even in a song. I did read everything you said it was great!