Question

Guys... I need a title for my poem, and if any critiques
....

Answer 1

I stand in an empty room
the floor creeks awakening all
while caressed by gloom
I hear forgotten cries of those lonely
as I look about the room, it seems as dead as it feels
the wallpaper seems to peel like dead skin
If you listen closely
you can hear the whispers of all that’s happened
the walls, the walls, they know all!
Slowly I walk towards the table
trying to escape the noise
it seems colder now,
what’s going on... ?!
if you listen closely they’ll tell you
‘one who enters never exits'
the walls, they know all...

Answer 2

The whispers XD

Answer 3

what is ids

Answer 4

dis

Answer 5

sppooky room

Answer 6

walls

Answer 7

i think u must give it "the walls of life" or " the lonely "

Answer 8

or " the walls they know all"

Answer 9

I am thinking Escape as a title perhaps?

And line 2, creaks rather than creeks.

Answer 10

Either walls, the darkest hour, or the hell room, or hallucinations, or the lonely room of walls.

Answer 11

thanks guys c:

Answer 12

so.. have u got the title..??

Answer 13

deciding to use one of the above answers or combine some of them cx

Answer 14

Like the darkest hours of the lonely walls escaping into your past?

Answer 15

lol

Answer 16

may be u can use jonathan's with a little modification
lonely room's wall ,know all

Answer 17

lol, Escape of the breathing walls .. maybe cx

Answer 18

I think that's too long though

Answer 19

Some of these are kinda wordy for titles lol. For the title of a poem, you should be concise, and descriptive.

Answer 20

or may be "unfaithful walls"

Answer 21

* to

Answer 22

Vallary, you were correct with too.

Answer 23

.. alright, didn't think I was /.\

Answer 24

Or how about just Empty room since you do start out describing it is an empty room?
So it can be "The Empty Room"

Answer 25

Hidden Memories?

Answer 26

^ all good suggestions, I like Hidden Memories..

Answer 27

or" forgotten cries"
cos that would attract most of the people who 've lost their near and dear one

Answer 28

Oh oh oh oh!!!! "Hidden Memories Within the Walls" <----- Sounds mysterious and awesome

Answer 29

Slightly lengthy...

Answer 30

Hidden Memories Within the lonely Walls
sounds more awesome...

Answer 31

Someone give me a medal :D Austin, ive me one, and I will give you one!

Answer 32

I like it, seems more of a title for a novel rather than a poem...

Answer 33

Nm, guuden smurgen gave me one xD lol

Answer 34

whispering walls..

Answer 35

Or the draining walls

Answer 36

Untold Secrets...

Answer 37

jonathan whispering according to me is more accurate
cos... "whisper" has been used in the poem

Answer 38

I like that, "Untold Secrets". It leaves some mystery, and is descriptive as well. Plus it is short, which is always a plus.

Answer 39

what about "empty room of life" ?

Answer 40

I think it's more accurate.. since those who enter never exit ^.^

Answer 41

Yeah, Untold Secrets is the winner to me!

Answer 42

sorry for those not viewing who's notifications are blowing up...

Answer 43

that doesnot matter..vallary

Answer 44

Yeah, glad I.... WE could help :D