Question

I need help adding poetic devices into my poem , someone please helpp :/

Answer 1

incorporate at least three poetic devices of your choice:
Simile
Metaphor
Hyperbole
Oxymoron
Paradox
Personification
Allusion
Repetition

and my poem is ;

Sometimes we fight with all our might And doors are seemed to close But in the end, friends again And that’s what counts the most Through thick and thin, tested by time Our friendship will never die We might grow old, and all secrets might get told But we’ll be here, as time goes by.

Answer 2

Try making stanzas, or poem paragraphs. This isn't in the list above, but it might just make it look nicer. For example:
Without Stanza: Sometimes we fight with all our might And doors are seemed to close...

With Stanza:
Sometimes we fight.
With all out might,
And doors are seamed too close...

As for perhaps a metaphor/simile, try thinking of examples of the adjectives in your poem.
For example, let's take "Through thick and thin."
Thick - Blood, concrete, as the earth beneath our feet ((dunno where that came from))
Thin - paper, air, etc.

I would do more, but for the sake of time, how about you ask me about ones you're interested in?