Question

Could someone proof read this sponsor letter?

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am/we are writing this letter to you on behalf of the bilingual class 5a of the BG/BRG St. Martin Gymnasium, in Villach, Austria. Part of our curriculum is to gain hands on experience with foreign languages, such as French and English. Therefore, it is important to travel and stay in places such as France and the UK in order to improve in these subjects.

For our class to be able to successfully complete this stipulation??????? we would need a minimum of 48,000 euros for the entire class. We are planning a series of fundraisers among which one of the most important is a buffet where we would like to sell your products.

We would highly appreciate your help in any way you consider appropriate, (We would highly appreciate a donation of _____) so we can fulfill the amount of money required to extend our course of study. Should you decide to support us or have any questions please contact us at this same address or per email at sophia@navarre.net. Thank you for taking the time to read this letter.

Yours Sincerely,

Gladys Moraru/Sophia Navarre

Answer 2

what do you need?

Answer 3

i don't think you need the comma after gymnasium. there shouldn't be all those question marks after stipulation but one comma.

Answer 4

comma after amongst and after important.

Answer 5

no no no,lol your correct is correct you dont need all of those ...and comma after amongst is correct,,,


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Answer 6

fan me?

Answer 7

i became a fan, if it made you happier lol

Answer 8

it does and i hope i helped u